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I love the concept, the lighting, and placement of most of the things in the picture. the third fire from the left looks a little out of place though. I'm debating whether its because of the length of the fire or the angle. Same with the third floating ball from the left. At first I thought maybe you were going from small to bigger but then you finish with a smaller ball. It just seemed a little odd in my opinion. I like the placement and different angles of the cubes. the theme and the color scheme go well together. I'm neutral about the apple, but what exactly has caught the mices attention?
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fantasio Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks so much for taking the time to write your critique, muchg appreciated!

Im still struggling to find the fire, the cubes and the mice of which you speak, but maybe you mean the lighting circles around the spheres, the one cube and the rat that is kind of doing the snuffle on the pair of wings - or on what might be there in between those;)

The apple is a reference to the meme that appeared around a couple namely Adam and Eve, but that is a totally different story, I just wanted that apple to sit there.
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tiffcindo Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2013
The apple part makes sense now. Thank you for taking the time to explain that to me. Maybe in your description you can clarify about the rat part, that way your audience will understand just as I do now. =)
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fantasio Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
youre welcome!
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